Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisement tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which one do you agree with?
Whether advertisements encourage people to buy unnecessary things or help them to improve their lives has always been a topic of intense discussion. Although in my opinion adverts play a critical role in imparting knowledge about products and making product selection easier for a buyer. In the below paragraphs I will present some examples in support of my opinion.
To begin with most of the companies nowadays from retail to manufacturing sector use adverts to showcase not only the benefits of their new products but also provide vivid options for comparison to consumers. For instance online food stores have adverts about the prepackaged lunch options therefore it gives an option for busy parents to compare and choose healthiest diet for their children thus providing guardians additional time for their leisure or work related activities.
Similarly there are some online applications like nearbuy.com which advertise all the options available to a consumer based on a product selection and further do an online cost comparison thus making it easier for a customer to select the best product available in cheapest price. For instance last week I bought a solar charger for my mobile phone at the cheapest price through an online website which were advertising multiple options thus making the buying process easier for the end-user.
Although there are many critics who suggest that adverts encourage people to buy unnecessary things which in my view is not correct. For instance if an advert is showcasing the benefits of a dishwasher and someone prefers to wash the dishes with hand then it is entirely up to that person to make a decision to buy that product.
To conclude it is evident that advantages of adverts fairly outweigh the disadvantages therefore in my opinion adverts have only benefited our lives for better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the healthiest'.
Suggestion: choose the healthiest
... option for busy parents to compare and choose healthiest diet for their children thus providing ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... leisure or work related activities. Similarly there are some online applications like...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the cheapest'.
Suggestion: in the cheapest
...er to select the best product available in cheapest price. For instance last week I bought ...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing process easier for the end-user. Although there are many critics who suggest that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20134228188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75515413089 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9383016109 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14488137841 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687046151537 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467234380386 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855447379881 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502557765464 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.