Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
Some people believes that, advertisment instigate them to buy products which they actually do not requier. While the others thinks it helps them in bettering their lifestyle. According to me a coin has two sides, likewise, advertisment plays an vital role in marketing of any product as well as push people to try them.
Nowadays, Commercials has a great influence over the viewers and is a very effective medium to promote goods to the target audience. but the consumers feel they are puched to try new products which they did not even think they will need. For example, discount offer advertisment of a mall. this encourages the people to go shopping to buy items on cheap price, even if they do not need new cloths at present.
However, other people support such promotional campaigns because they give information about new products lauched in market and getting expossure to a better way of living. For example, Food proccesor, which people may not need them but ut helps in getting the work done fast and is of convenience.
Whilst I see this as both an opportunity and a push to purchase required goods. Irrespective of I may need or do not need the product. it happened to me once, I was lurred by the advertisment of an bread trimmer and the very next day i bought the trimmer but in reality i prefer to use blades to shave my beard.
In conclusion, In my opinion advertisment are usefull to discover new utility items and at sometime we end up buy things we would eventualy end up lying as a show peice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, likewise, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67286245353 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69778362946 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8272015906 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6923076923 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269514469243 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949996872117 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690580775969 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137507247162 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302116551095 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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