Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this expeditiously changing world, Advertisement has become one of the most powerful and convenient way to prompt new products and service. Though everyone can divide all advertising products and services into useless ones and useful ones, yet, still many commentators argue that advertising contaminate people's mind to buy thing without any requirement. In this essay, I shall discuss how commercials help individuals to select better products which improves their life.
To make a start on, Different Ads imparts detailed and prominent factors of product or service which can ease anyone's life to choose specific one. The reason behind that is, Everyday markets are flooded new products and service of same kind. Displays or bulletins help public to choose the most suitable and effective one. For instance, Many smartphone users prefer to buy IPhone, Ignoring a huge range of phones in the market by just seeing their advertisement. Public announcements improving every person life by giving them information of new technologies and services.
Secondarily, Advertisement can be skipped by anyone if he/she is not interested to buy those things and can save their time. This is because, If anyone not interested in any specific product he/she already leave, then you can simply ignore it. For example, I do not like jewelry and I don't want to see any details about them, So I can simply ignore them. People have the power to select any advertisement they like and consider it as a useful one for them.
Hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying Advertising definitely improves ones own life by letting them know about new product an service and their accurate range in market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind buying'.
Suggestion: mind buying
...ue that advertising contaminate peoples mind to buy thing without any requirement. In this ...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'leaves'.
Suggestion: leaves
... in any specific product he/she already leave, then you can simply ignore it. For exa...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or example, I do not like jewelry and I dont want to see any details about them, So ...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... by letting them know about new product an service and their accurate range in mar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14492753623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78658758401 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.715581482 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20110139758 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708247743146 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398668507994 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1279225709 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321838829635 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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