Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some would argue that ads urge us to purchase unnecessary products, while others think introducing new items is a good thing. In my opinion, advertising is a positive way to promote outcoming goods.
Nowadays people live in the era of consumption, advertisements are everywhere and play an important role in our society, without them some people could be lost and confused what product is suitable to buy, therefore, they can make our lives more convenient and help in deciding. In my experience, when i feel unsure purchasing new things, ads have helped me a lot about the content and practical usage. For example, i bought two in one vacuum cleaner and mop combined, that i saw from television, it has made my busy life much easier as it is handy and easy to use.
One of the most influencive commercials for drivers are billboards which are often located on the road to catch busy people mind while driving. These can impact people way of thinking without their notice and therefore lead attention subconsciously to find out ways to buy it. For example, people are hungry after work and see the McDonald’s burger sign, which is discounted and just after 5 minutes on the left side of the road. While driving you might not notice how your brain is working and processing the information that you saw and without realising you are already in McDonald’s buying a burger.
In conclusion, commercials help to make our decisions easier and improve our lives by giving information about new products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01176470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01283681898 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.125966847 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.75 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200705977181 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082078595019 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352070800442 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118825323947 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150306013636 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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