Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays technology has developed so far that people can watch movies on their gadgets such as smartphones and tablets which has changed the importance to go to the cinema. Some still believe it is a pleasure to see a movie on a big screen. In my opinion, it is an old-fashioned thing to go to the cinema, watching movies at home is more convenient.

Going to the cinema with friends is an old-fashioned way to see films instead of people download movies on their phones, tablets or computer. It is actually time and money-saving and you can feel much more relaxed and comfortable at home. In cinemas, you need to wait in the queue to buy popcorn whereas at home you can prepare some snacks and eat all the preferable food. In addition, you do not need to excuse yourself to go to the toilet while the movie is on, you can easily stop and play the movie at any time you want. For example, in these days you can even set up a cinema scenery at home by putting the movie screen up.

Cinemas were popular but today their value has decreased significantly. People have discovered that there is no need to spend money on tickets and all the movies come later on television anyway. Especially sad is that the movies have lost their actual value. Some cinemas have even gone to bankruptcy which means in the future we might not have any movie places or there will be some and more expensive ones. Some cinemas try to keep the visitors up and keep doing promotive deals. For example, in Tallinn every month first Tuesday all are the tickets on sale as cheap as a child ticket. So at least a few people go to the cinema which helps the place working.

In conclusion, using phones as a way to watch movies is in my opinion much more comfortable than going out to the cinema, therefore, unfortunately, cinemas are facing a bankrupt.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5045045045 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51767373251 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0214781411 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230841938902 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791132714515 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045896621067 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145724618855 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00909398739663 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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