In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
People like to build a house in private and quiet places like the countryside can offer. Although some people think that we should keep countryside like it is and not build any more houses there. In my opinion, urbanization is an increasing problem whereas it is better to support country life and build a house in the countryside.
In these days people rather choose to live in a city than in a country which can ruin the countryside economy. In the last ten years, a large number of people who lived in a country have moved to the city. Mainly because of lack of educational organizations and workplaces. Also, adolescents get bored in a small village and they need to challenge themselves. For example, a small village in Estonia with 500 people had a couple schools, shops, and cinema. A relaxing place to live until young people started to move to the city. For now, there is nothing left because the small village was struggling and unable to keep those facilities.
Rural areas have an important impact on our farm animals. Therefore it is necessary to keep the countryside popular and build new houses there. Villages are strongly depending on the population, if there are no people there is no life. There are several benefits of living in the countryside like privacy, fresh air and no rush like in a city. To support countryside it is vital to encourage people living there. For instance, it should be encouraged by the government to offer better facilities like schools, shops and other organizations that people could live happily in the countryside. For a brighter future, it is useful to keep a country as a sustainable place to live.
In conclusion, people are facing an increasing problem which is urbanization. It would be great to balance the life between the cities and the countryside. Living in a rural area is not easy when people are leaving and shops as closing, the government should encourage people living in a country area.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83976261128 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7629475137 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483679525223 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2303028677 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.55 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179334473211 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595433503894 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572638937082 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118167708068 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613981993722 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.