Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is believed that e-books and some modern devices are taking over the use of newspapers and journals. I agree that e-books and smartphones are more handy and convenient to use instead of buying magazines from the kiosk and spend extra money on them.

The usage of E-books is gaining popularity nowadays, especially because of the busy life people live.  In addition,  it saves money and time to own a modern device like smartphone or e-book at home that directly connects with the recent news. Moreover, on the phone, there are several apps to download which shows different country newspapers with local news. For example, I read the news every day from my phone, it is one click away to see what is happening around and it gives all the information and is easy to follow. If I need to know more, it is easy to google additional material.  

Purchasing newspapers and magazines is an old-fashioned way and it is wasting paper. In these days people are environmental friendly trying to reduce waste and repurpose the materials. Supporting this point of view, it is surely better to use e-book that helps to reduce the use of paper. For instance, manufacturing an e-book produces as much CO2 as producing 30 print books.  Therefore, there is nothing bad to forget magazines and go with the new technology flow that offers us new gadgets that makes our lives much easier.

In conclusion, from e-books and cellphones, it is easy to follow the recent news instead of wasting money and time to buy a newspaper from the kiosk. In addition, we save the paper by using the newest technology gadgets.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8381294964 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88663405669 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8156784179 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177603284111 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633648168094 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414453638446 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111420518717 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411966144433 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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