Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
-give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
-explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
-describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the sports club ‘’Sparta’’ that is located in Albany region. I heard that you are considering to close this sports centre which is really sad to hear.
I used to visit Sparta almost every day with my friends and sometimes with my older sister. It has offered so much entertainment and sports facilities. Especially during rainy days it has been such a pleasure to spend time indoors and play tennis or basketball there.
I feel that there is a lot of people visiting Sparta. Firstly, they find it entertaining as there is lots of space with different activities like playing table tennis, basketball, football and so on. Secondly, there is a room for using computers with internet, a lot of schoolchildren find it a good place to study with peers after school. A lot of people have made strong friendship here and it is like an after school gathering together place.
Please take into account that if you will close this centre a lot of people would be sad and it is hard to find an alternative place for that.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Freeman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... centre which is really sad to hear. I used to visit Sparta almost every day w...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
.... Firstly, they find it entertaining as there is lots of space with different activities like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84536082474 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16899653808 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8815392017 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117588923452 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493024037583 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575981736086 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065195092123 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455766002911 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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