During a decent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
-remind him when and where you met
-tell him what kind of job you are interested in
-say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear John,
how have you been? Remember we met about 2 months ago in an Emirates plane and had a really good chat. We found a lot of similarities in our lives and talked about your successful businesses. You mentioned that you have restaurants in Australia and New Zealand and if I remember right the name was Vapiano restaurant?
I was just thinking back to our talk and you told me something about a need to hire a manager in one of your restaurants. I’m actually really keen to work in your restaurant as a manager if you still are looking for one. I quit my previous job as I am moving from Germany to New Zealand and would like to work in the same position as I am used to.
This job would be perfect for me cause I’ve extensive experience as a restaurant manager, been working over 5 years in this position. I know how to lead a group of people, I’ve good communication skills and can handle stress well. Let me know if you have something to offer and let’s catch up and have a coffee.
Take care buddy,
Paul
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, really, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42487046632 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62849082156 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616580310881 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3632858127 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6363636364 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188716421173 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699155269134 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561960799279 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129811981919 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04836546131 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.