Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sporting facilities, others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that the most effective way to enhance public health is by raising the number of sporting facilities, while others say this would have a minor change and that other measures are needed. Although increasing sporting facilities would help them exercise frequently, I believe people need to be educated on public health to prevent illness.
On the one hand, some believe that building more sporting centers would help people to exercise more which will improve their health. This is because the price of these facilities would be reduced and more people would be able to sign up at these centers to exercise and stay healthy without visiting the hospital. For example, In Nigeria, the Daily Sports reported that there has been an increase in people who registered at various sports centers to exercise because of low cost registration payment. However, I believe that this does not solve the actual problem because most people spend lots of money on registration at these facilities.
On the other hand, other people would say that education on health is taught to be a major improvement in public health. The reason is that by educating people through the media and in schools on public health, they tend to get a better understanding on the information being given to them to prevent illness. For example, a study from the Metropolitan Teaching Hospital reported that the rate of malaria infection had dropped from 60% to 30% because people adhered to the public lecture on malaria in 2019. I believe this is a preferable solution because educating people on health issues improves their well being and reduce their visit to hospitals.
To conclude, although expanding sporting facilities might help people to keep fit, it does not improve their health entirely and that is why it is more important to educate people on health issues.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53674297773 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.5544282363 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 141.909090909 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387671876381 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171505863585 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136588222533 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26248185497 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128951259317 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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