Many museums charge for admission, while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to
museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Lots of museums charge an entry fee, while others do not. This essay thinks
that the drawbacks of charging fees do not outweigh the benefits because
although some people are excluded when museums charge admission,
museums need the funding.
The main disadvantage is that high fees exclude a large proportion of the
population, especially in less developed countries. Many people in poorer
countries have just enough money for food and shelter and exhibits and
museums are one of the few cultural activities they can enjoy free of charge.
For example, Egypt has millions of poor people, but also a rich ancient
culture and it is important that all the people get to experience these
artefacts, not just those that can afford it. But this essay would argue that
people with such serious concerns are unlikely to appreciate the arts.
However, there are some who say that museums are unsustainable without
the money they get from ticket sales. They say that this allows the buildings
to remain open and it is better that some people get to see the exhibits,
rather than none at all. For instance, in the UK there have been huge
government spending-cuts over the last few years, and museums have had
to rely on entrance fees to stay open. Therefore, it is obvious that without
these charges, there would be no museums at all.
In conclusion, although it is unfortunate that everyone cannot enjoy the
exhibits in a museum, the money earned from charging people to enter is
often the only thing that is keeping the doors open.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44727733132 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6035738776 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.818181818 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351563479223 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120951055703 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105897835505 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855425887247 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841847410428 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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