Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are still required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Everyone has the opinion that sports make the person physical fit and therefore some people think that mass health can be improved by increasing the physical activities in their life. However, others people believe that only sports tasks are not enough to keep the person fit and other measures are equally important. I shall explain both views in essay.
People who solely rely on the games for being fit have some valid points. To begin with, all outdoor games require extensive physical actions; resulting lots of exercise of every part of body which make the body fit and keep all vital parameters in control. For example, cardiovascular diseases can be prevented by running or fast walking as it helps to burn the cholesterol and bumps fresh oxygen in hearts. Another point is to achieve mental toughness by playing the sports. It is generally seen that sports develop the competitiveness and make the person strong in overcome the life challenge. For instance, Indian cricket caption reached the highest fitness level among the other cricketers and known for being mentally tough in challenging situations.
Notwithstanding, sports person sometime gets unfit despite of rigorous physical events and it points out that there are other factors also which contribute in health. Firstly, life style which includes what you eat, when you eat, sleep and so on have impact on person’s health. In recent survey in America for instance, talked obesity as one of the reason for deteriorating mass health. Secondly, sedentary life style equally damages the fitness of the person. It has now become general to sit at least 8-10 hours in office doing work on computer or laptop and this sometime affect the spinal or neck which can’t be cured fully by exercises.
In conclusion, while playing sports, up-to some extent, person can be fit, daily diets and life style also needs to be on right side in order to be completely fit and remain fit for long.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03076923077 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55402409019 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.158995929 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123896316799 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477017821533 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481745828633 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882876290828 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773439383395 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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