Some people say that government should control the amount of violence in the films and on television in order to control violent crimes in society.
How far do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Few individuals consider that the government should introduce a check or control in the films as well as on television programs to bring down the crime rate in the society. I vehemently agree to the conviction as actions of people are always dependent on what is being watched and learnt in their cores by them.
Firstly, competition in the entertainment industry has changed the standards and principles on which it used to operate. Moreover, movies as well as series are used as a source of entertainment during leisure time, similarly, rejuvenate children with the hilarious plays. However, scripts are changed drastically with the introduction of violent content. While all the teenagers spend plethora of their time on watching them. As a consequence, their learning and actions are driven to a negative direction. Therefore, serving as an impetus to involve themselves into the wrong doings.
Secondly, internet is rampant in all the remote areas of the country. Furthermore, individuals are able to watch every such movies and propelling them towards performing the crimes. Besides this,they serve as an epitome to learn and perform such henious acts. As a result, women and children are not safe whenever they are out from the houses during night. There is a sharp increase in the kidnapping cases in the recent time.
To conclude, advocate the notion that content for any film or web series should not be approved unless it has been reviewed. Undoubtedly, government should intervene in this matter. Every broadcast should be monitored closely by the officials so that we can dream about the better and safe tomorrow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...th the introduction of violent content. While all the teenagers spend plethora of the...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ards performing the crimes. Besides this,they serve as an epitome to learn and perfor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15849056604 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83085275228 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7318055376 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150397593383 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04083913685 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641517899364 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925500918739 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797398405876 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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