People have different views about whether history or science and technology are the most significant subjects in school. Some people think that history is of course essential while others say that science and technology subjects are more crucial. Personally, I believe that both history or science and technology are fundamental subjects in school.
On the one hand, history is an essential subject for any individual and countries in today's school. History recorded the most important events and knowledge from the ancestors. Students can understand how their country was established and they can also learn from the achievement or mistake that happened in the past. In addition to the student, it is beneficial to learn the history of his field, which can be helpful to understand a certain subject deeply. Moreover, the histories of disasters that remind us to avoid the same mistake happen again. History should not be ignored in the school and it can shape the way to progress.
On the other hand, science and technology certainly represent a significant element in today's modern world. Science and technology contribute in several fields from individual to country. The promotion on medical treatment, more and more medical equipment had invented by those technicians and scientist's cooperation in terms of life saving. In addition, students who study science and technology subjects have more opportunities in their future career. Most companies are looking for employees who are professional on technology or science field and this sort of position are provided better salaries. Therefore, science and technology not only contribute to our society but also gain a better opportunity in career.
In conclusion, in this modern world, history reminds us the failure and knowledge from the past and learns from mistakes in order to prevent the disaster happen again, while science and technology are equally important to our world's promotion and gain a better position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, of course, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38263665595 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80189981439 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504823151125 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8528409775 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393993496743 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1420021884 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112162578862 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247679914813 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151202720497 0.056905535591 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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