It is true that environment, poverty and animal issues have become popular subjects for the younger generation. They start to realize those issues are undoubtedly in relation to their future life. It is believed that the academic knowledge has improved their ways of thinking and this also connects to their survival in the future.
In the past, the old generation only focused on money making in order to earn for living. In order to survive, they only cared about their personal demand without negative implication. Nowadays, life has become earlier than before, advanced technology has improved the way of living and more information can easily be searched online. Most youngsters are well educated, so more and more people start to become interested in gaining new information worldwide. In addition to university students, this sort of issue is normally to be the academic subjects so some of them become interested in it during collecting the issues for the presentation. Therefore, it is because of the improvement of knowledge gaining.
It is believe that young generation will face the critical living condition in the future. As the serious damage on nature and animal, and global warming causes extreme weather conditions to the food stocks. It can be seen that youngsters could not get out of this situation in their lifetime. They have to come to realize that human should stop to hurt the natures or every single creature in the earth or even support the poor people around the world. In terms of saving their future, they should start to be aware of this sort of information and start to make efforts because everything is connected and they already get involved.
In conclusion, the tendency of information carving in the young generation not only pushes them to notice about this sort of issue but also to face those problems in their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02903225806 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63167490378 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1369462158 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.933333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136103663171 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045058847021 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389196309285 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886794966924 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269352971662 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.