Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is told to be many prescribed way for predicting people’s characteristics base on their preferences such as type of their desirable food, color and so on. One of these debatable areas is possibility of telling about personality and culture of others according to their clothes. I believe it would not be possible. This idea will be proven by looking at how this term of generalization can lead to prejudice and misleading.
For one, in some religious due to their rules people have to put on specific clothes. Take Muslims as an example. Islamic women are told to wear some kinds of scarf to conceal their hair. On the other hand, societies are witnessed many terrorism attacks which are done by women wearing scarfs, showing by media. Following the theory of judging people according their clothes may generate the concept of all women wearing scarfs are terrorists. As this example shows, appearance of people is not an appropriate mirror for their character.
Besides that, globalization makes it possible to find same merchandises at same time in different geographic places. For many youths, it is an important concern to follow latest trends. For instance, blue jeans is a piece of clothes which is commonplace in all societies and wide ranges of people regardless to gender, age, culture, education and personality wear it. Hence it cannot represent anything about people’s taught. following this example, clothes choice is not a reliable issue for categorizing people.
As shown above, it is obvious that in the area of choosing what to wear factors such as price, availability, trend, etc; are more effective than way of thinking. It is recommended not to let such stereotypes effect on our choices of people for starting conversation and getting acquaintance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, may, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18493150685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97768803078 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0101782434 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208295779858 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648442564619 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745626428793 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116120893879 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531489639338 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.