Some people argue that one of the best ways to make people from different cultures and generation together is listening music. I totally agree with this view.
On the one hand, music plays a significant role in improving the relationship of human being. The first reason is everyone has an equal right to take part in public concerts and enjoy compositions thanks to the development of media and economy. Therefore, a lot of chances are created for people in different cultures and ages to integrate with others. Another reason is music can be great tools to make friend with strangers. In fact, there are various generations and nationalities in a popular music fan club where people can be friend with others who have the same favorite.
On the other hand, music also has a great influence on every aspect of life. Firstly, music could raise our awareness about current threats such as pollution or global warming. For example, a song called “What I have done” composed by a popular rock band communicated environmental messages to millions of people. Secondly, a huge benefit is created by music industry every year in many countries. For instance, K-pop or US music stars could make billions of dollars for their economy in a short time. Finally, through the meaning of songs, children are also learned about morale or motivation which can be effective for them in the future.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that music has significant impacts on us, especially in bringing people together.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99601593625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70360338775 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6900253151 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268750265999 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902529834817 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968389873702 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197702414227 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130565130604 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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