Some people say that not all criminals should be sent to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work to help people in
community. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Different punishments abided by law and order are given depending on the crime which is committed by criminals. However, it is believed by few people that some lawbreakers are allowed to do community services instead of imprisonment. I strongly agree with this opinion by looking towards its benefits to both the government and felonies, which are discussed along with pragmatic examples in my discourse ahead.
To begin with, it seems obvious that an unpaid work option as a punishment for few culprits is beneficial to the bureaucrats. This means to say that overcrowding in jails could be avoided which further reduces the expenditures involved in stay, meals and scrutiny of felons. Moreover, petty criminals do not get in contact with serious offenders which further avoid spreading of crimes in the society. Take for instance, according to an article published in Toronto Times in 2019 on sentences in western countries, more than government of Canada saved more than 20% expenditure by introducing free work by criminals involved in small crimes compared to 2018. Thus, it clearly evident to suggest alternative option of community service for some wrongdoers.
Additionally, lawbreakers who committed small crimes would get pivotal benefits by involving in social works as their punishment. In other words, by doing the community services, certain skills can be uphilled by criminals which could have numerous positives once they are released by an authority. In addition, these acquired skills could be used to get better employment in future. A best illustration is the Indian government involved some criminals in government funded restaurants has made it possible for felonies to get jobs in same field owing to skills they developed during their punishment. Consequently, this approach is indispensable to consider by having its benefits to society.
To conclude, by looking towards above discussion, I am of strong opinion that some lawbreakers should be involved in social services to have its long term advantages to government and mass also. The authorities should introduce certain laws having dual benefits.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion:
...der by having its benefits to society. To conclude, by looking towards above di...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... term advantages to government and mass also. The authorities should introduce certa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41441441441 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96745324339 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9807806923 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227156125355 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706186368505 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509335570184 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133615804429 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345717008117 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... could be used to get better employment in future. A best illustration is the Indian gove...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: The
...sed to get better employment in future. A best illustration is the Indian governm...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...der by having its benefits to society. To conclude, by looking towards above di...
^^^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... term advantages to government and mass also. The authorities should introduce certa...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41441441441 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96745324339 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9807806923 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227156125355 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706186368505 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509335570184 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133615804429 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345717008117 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.