Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the advancements of the technology, more and more people tend to use their mobile phones, tablets or laptops for watching movies or dramas with the comfort of their own. In the old days people used to go to cinema’s to watch new movies with families or friends. There are two points of view among people where some people say watch the movies or dramas in their phones or tablets while others think that to get most of the entertainment from the movie is watching in the cinemas. We will discuss both of these views in below sections.
Firstly there are a lot of benefits watching movies on mobiles, tablets or laptops as this is the cheap way of watching movie without wasting a lot of money on cinema tickets. The entertainments platform such as Netflix monthly subscription is less than one movie cinema ticket and with Netflix one can watch thousands of movies without using much money. Furthermore, watching movie on handheld devices gives the power to people to control the movie (Pause or Play anytime) and can be watched in their comfort zones.
There is some other point of view where people say that excitements and entertainment of movies can only be experienced in cinema which is actually correct. In cinema, people get a big High definition screen with best quality of audio system. All the actions and 3d effects that are put in the movies where movies directors spends a lot of money are viewed in cinemas with great clarity.
Both the above point of views have their pros and cons and we can conclude like that if you want to watch inexpensive and a lot movies then the movies on mobile devices are for you otherwise if one is looking for real movie experience with high definition audio and video quality then opt for cinemas on the cost of money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...people get a big High definition screen with best quality of audio system. All the action...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66560509554 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44580389068 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477707006369 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4025517865 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.181818182 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184862541995 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983174967197 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622584055236 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130422586137 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569286882292 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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