Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent times people argue the different ideas about the cinema. As we know it, the cinema is always be part of us since the many years. Because the movie is meaning the watching something different from our real life. Maybe is key for into imagine wold instead of realistic life. And also, the other meaning for the cinema is social life. Due the this activity individuals be able to connect with each other. It easy way for communication.
Some part of people claim, the cinema is old-fashioned. It not a renowned anymore. With the developing technology the cinema is effected bad. Actually it’s not a surprise for this decant. The human nature always want to find more easy ways for everything. Including the watching movie. If the individuals want to choice more comfortable place as like their home or want to more flexible time as like their choice, they be able watch from their phone or tablets. Therefore, this people says time and place management is vital. Thus they support the this idea.
However, the rest of the people says, the cinema is could be old but it’s not meaning the boring. Since onset from ancient people, the social life always be requirement for us. The theatre, concert, gaming and cinema therefore came out. For this reasons, going the cinema or theatre always be more enjoy rather than stay at home. You have a chance for meeting the new people. Or you can living the real movie experience.
In my opinion, I always support the cinema, concert or theatre for social life. We need it. I have been trying to going to movies. When I attempt the cinema or concert it like a new world which I never seen before.Therefore obviously is not the same situation watching from home. We should encourage the people for this affairs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ome. We should encourage the people for this affairs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77922077922 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46796817753 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5144251269 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.5185185185 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4074074074 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.7037037037 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209987789597 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580801824393 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501529410691 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136881955515 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209896951276 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.26 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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