Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both views and give your own opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The revolution technology of electronic equipments, had facility watching films either in cellphone or table. Which we see many people pefert it ,rather than watching films in cinema .in this topic i will go trough they two options in details ,and i will give me recommandation and thinking.

On one hand watching films through electronic equipment like cellphone and tablet has adaventages and benifet , like alllwing people To see films whenever they wants either during day or night , and alos whenever they are at home in train ,...,in addition its benefit for some older films that can't be seeing now at cinema,however going to cinema people required to schdule thier time and move from place to anther using transportation spending more money.for example i used to watch film every saturday nigth from my tablet without going to cinema specially during deffuclet weather,the preacution that need to be take is to put the glass before you started watching to diminue the risk to the eys.

On the other hand cinema its social place,for family and friends to meet and spend great time, in watching films in big scren, and after that going to have launch toghter which allowed to inforce the relationship with people in general.

In conclution in my opinion watching films in cellphone or cinema ,it beneficial for people to enjoy and had good time,but remain that in cellpone less problems and expenss

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11965811966 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65202789184 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65811965812 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.555551057 49.4020404114 444% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.6 106.682146367 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.8 20.7667163134 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.4 7.06120827912 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283257188236 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139917333484 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647473404664 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162113082531 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518557248448 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments