Nowadays, due to advancement of technology, people have an easy access to movies and web series on their mobile phones and tablets and they refuse to go to the movie theaters. However, many argue that cinema hall provides a perfect experience of a movie as it has high quality surround sound and comfortable seats. I believe, even though fast internet connections and entertainment apps make it possible to watch movies at our convenience, watching a movie at theater will always have more to offer in terms of experiencing the film to its fullest.
To begin with, movie halls offers a lot of advantage over watching a movie at home. Theaters are specially designed with state-of-art infrastructure, to provide a perfect experience of a film. They are installed with Dolby surround sound system, comfortable seats and the screen size is big enough providing real life experience. Other than that Movie theater creates the atmosphere to enjoy different films. An action sequence seen on such huge screen cannot do justice when watched on smaller screens.
On the other hand, those who prefer to watch a movie on their cellphones or tablets favors it due to increase in the ticket prize. There has been significant increase in the prize of a movie ticket in last few years. The cost has increased like 4 times. Apart form that, people also prefer to watch at home, as it gives them their own time convenience. At home they can even pause and rewind a movie if they miss something. Although, true experience of movies with great action sequence and horror movies are not justifiable at home.
In conclusion, even though people can save money and time by watching movies at their own time at home, but the experience that is provided by movie theater in watching a particular genre cannot be justified at home. So in order to enjoy some of the movies, Cinema hall is the best option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
... advancement of technology, people have an easy access to movies and web series on their mobil...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...talled with Dolby surround sound system, comfortable seats and the screen size is...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: APART_FORM[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: Apart from
...s. The cost has increased like 4 times. Apart form that, people also prefer to watch at ho...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...justified at home. So in order to enjoy some of the movies, Cinema hall is the best option....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84829721362 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66584861585 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9349051698 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989400458925 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369899443524 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326805970903 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708076506563 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274083753334 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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