In the era of integrating society, speaking more than one language is a ubiquitous demand for every citizen. It is argued, however, over whether foreign language learners acquire this verbal skill to get familiar with the country they intend to live, or if they expand their knowledge for other reasons. This essay will weigh two sides of matter before setting forth my perspective.
To begin with, we are all in an agreement that moving to a strange country requires meticulous preparation, including a good command of language in particular. Whatever they hold advanced qualifications or monetary abundance, linguistic barriers would instill the feeling of low confidence into their mind when they work in a different language speaking country. It is a similar case in terms of traveling, the avid travelers are often bilinguals or polyglots. Owning basic survival skills such as understanding a language would assist them a lot during their journeys. A prime example is when a tourist is threatened by a tiger in a dense forest, he could ask a local ranger wander around for help by the native language.
However, to say that this reasoning is the only motivation is too subjective. There are numerous benefits from mastering a language, besides immigrating and traveling. Concretely, English is long known as the lingua franca since this official language could be the bridge to harmony between different cultures and countries. Thus, using language effectively would lead to the facilitation of international marriage since the wave of viral online dating apps. That is not to mention the vast array of domestic job opportunities that can be found thanks to accomplished linguistic skill. Due to the fact that the increasing labor market exerts much pressure on graduates, those who could communicate fluently with foreigners might be the winners of the job hunting race. A concrete example in Vietnam shows that between two equivalent candidates applying for a position, the Human Resource Department would opt for the person with a high band score of IELTS certificate.
As demand for multiple languages grows in level, many people equip themselves to achieve a broad spectrum of aims, from daily communication to business collaboration. There is a strong correlation between language and future prospects, not merely living abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, still, thus, in particular, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28686327078 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9329979267 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651474530831 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9398976787 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179200363623 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488179521219 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447331705902 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994022106893 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171029361332 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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