Some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons. What is your opinion about that?
Some natives are of opinion that children should be taught about how to grow food and cooking from their teachers. I think this kind of encouragement will bring immense benefits towards their development in their health and skills. This essays discuss the reasons behind such need and its benefits for the children.
To begin with, I think in today 's world, children are more fascinated towards fast food and unhealthy food due to its availability in diverse options such as Italian , Chinese, Spanish food etc. and at near store these reason really make them attracted towards these unhealthy food. Hence, it gives birth to many diseases like obesity, blood pressure and so on. To protect this generation, growing food and cooking it by themselves is the best way to persuade them towards healthy and hygienic food. Moreover, when children grow food by themselves they came to know about the nutritional value of every food and how these food play an important role in their physical and mental growth.
Furthermore, when child grow food it gives them inner satisfaction and play an important role to protect the environment. Children develop many skills by cooking food like it brings discipline, manners, food etiquettes, their scope of knowledge in food. Besides this, children also become more creative as they use their innovative ideas to make the dish more delicious and well presented. For example there are many reality shows like master chef junior telecast on TV and internet Which motivate their hard work and develop their skills in this field. Therefore, this kind of involvement of children will only not develop their skills but also nurture them in healthy lifestyle with their own creative dishes.
In conclusion, parents and teacher both come forward and encourage their children towards this activity as it bring holistic development in them and protect them from any health issues.
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... internet Which motivate their hard work and develop their skills in this field. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1768488746 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5027577656 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556270096463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0151651216 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283968821879 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112482261861 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108490606676 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180090662489 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083481272368 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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