Some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons What is your opinion about that

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Some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons. What is your opinion about that?

Some people think that good health is the basic human need. therefore, the medical service should not be run by the profit-making private company. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?Some people think that good health is the basic human need. therefore, the medical service should not be run by the profit-making private company. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?Some people think that good health is the basic human need. therefore, the medical service should not be run by the profit-making private company. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?Some people think that good health is the basic human need. therefore, the medical service should not be run by the profit-making private company. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?Some people think that good health is the basic human need. therefore, the medical service should not be run by the profit-making private company. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?Some people think that good health is the basic human need. therefore, the medical service should not be run by the profit-making private company. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?Some people think that good health is the basic human need. therefore, the medical service should not be run by the profit-making private company. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 41.998997996 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58293838863 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4542448468 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 28.0 176.041082164 16% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.132701421801 0.561755894193 24% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.1874193393 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0754646849123 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049835045374 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203352642521 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754646849123 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.15 8.58950901804 60% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 11.0 78.4519038076 14% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.