Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say that it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Most of the people consider the television as a vital source of information with respect to the education, whereas, others opine that it only serves the purpose of entertainment. in my opinion, the television has been crucial for the society since its invention and played a major role as an information source for every individual.
Beyond doubt, there are several compelling reasons why some people prefer to utilize television as a source of information. Pictorial representation helps them to remember things easily. Firstly, the current affairs and news are the prime examples of an information source and up to the minute. the news channels provide information and knowledge about the nation's growth and developments. Secondly, a documentary on the discovery channels and on history network are quite popular to educate youngsters about the recent discoveries and about the history of the world. Thus, I believe that television can help society to educate each other in an easy manner
On the contrary, commercial networking has made it worst as the people start liking the television system, the businesses of entertainment have grown wider in the form films and serials. There are a plethora of reasons why individuals consider that television is only meant for a community to entertain, such as carton channels are common among kids and seen around the world to entertain them. Moreover, the addition of these programs in children at their age is wasteful for their future career. In addition to that films and television are serials are another epitome of hazards to the generation. Although some science-related movies are useful to guide people about the scientific inventions ongoing, which gives a ray of hope that people will learn from this.
In conclusion, small screens are quite famous around the globe. The information from this source is pivotal for the young generation especially including news and science-related subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31290322581 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94119437468 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1299985532 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.642857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217495284487 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617729044854 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582610840173 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123937702456 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756763681484 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.