Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say that it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Since histories, television has been an indispensable part of our lives. However, the content on television has revised a lot in terms of presentation in last few decades. It is commonly believed by many that tv is useful for education. However, many people defend this by saying that it is only for entertainment. this essay will discuss both the views and present my opinion about the television.
To begin with, it is undeniable that television provide a lot of information in a very attractive way. Its combinatoral use of audio and vedio makes the presentation very understandable and influencing as compared to paper media or radio. Morever, these days, there are number of quiz shows that improves our general knowledge and current affairs. Even, we have options to play simultaneously and win attractive prices while sitting at home. News broadcast is another major example of information sharing on television. we have numerous news channel that make us aware of the current events around the world in various local and foreign languages.
On the other side, it is also a great source of entertainment, watching television is the best thing that majority of families do together on holiday or weekends. we could watch movies in our native languages or daily soaps or comedy shows on weekend and they keep us busy and refreshes our mind from office or business's or personal issues.
In my opinion, watching tv is more educational these days because there are various other source of entertainments available like playing games on phones or tablets, doing outdoor activities and so on. In a survey conducted by Delhi University on 1500 teenagers, it was found that 80% of students improved their english language skills by watching english films , listening english songs or english news on television.
To conclude, television is not only a source of entertainment, it is majorly an educational instrument now a days, it not only offer information about other nation's economy or general events, but also through various shows and channel help us improve our language skills and common awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15406976744 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9446051404 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59011627907 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8715592478 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208830910317 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671202431136 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859284953427 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107776783144 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112656520197 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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