Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by few people that university students should choose the subject that they like most. On the other hand many believes that students should study only those subjects that has bright future. In my opinion students should concentrate on the subjects that they are passionate about.
Dreaming is natural to every human being so, every child bears a dream from their childhood that what they want to be in the future. It is not necessary to expart in every subject though it is not also possible. Each adolescent is passionate in a particular subject. If their passion become their profession in future then success in definate. For instance, if a teenager finds economics interesting and contigous his/her study in economics then there is high possibility that in future he/she can be a profound economist. However, it is also important that parents and teachers are also support student's dream. Encouraging by parents and teachers make children more confident that they can face and difficult situation to achive their goal.
Making students bound to choose subjects that has better future will not helpful either for them, their parents or society. Although many parents do not want to take chance with their children's future and they forcefully entered into studies which have high social acceptance such as, science, technology and law. Actually, these parents are building castles in the air to thinking that by doing this their children will be successful in life. But unfortunately these students get demotivate from their beginning of life. To illustrate this, if a student want to study in business and want to be a chief executive officer in a multinational company but his/her parents decided to make him/her a doctor. That person can never be a good doctor in life.
In the conclusion, I would like to recapitulate that every student should feel free to choose subjects to study that they are good at. So, they can show their excellence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ustrate this, if a student want to study in business and want to be a chief execu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, then, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04307692308 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6205126198 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526153846154 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0078907066 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0555555556 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324547269568 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109341042473 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976207158968 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236278746499 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120049807812 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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