Some people think that being creative in their free time is beneficial. Discuss pros and cons with your opinion.
Life is short and uncertain, so we fill our precious time with activities, commitments, and obligations. A section of society asserts that doing innovative activities in your spare moment is more advantageous. This essay intends to discuss both the pros and cons in the subsequent paragraphs with my opinion.
On the one hand, there are numerous benefits associated with utilising spare time to do enjoyable activities. Rejuvenating the mind by doing favourite things to enhance skills is the most prominent one. Many individuals spend a considerable amount of time either in an office or doing household chores, so they do not have much spare time to sharpen their skills, which leads them to a monotonous lifestyle. Doing activities like painting, singing, etcetera distracts the mind from routine worries and also fosters cognitive stimulation, which results in staying active.
On the other hand, there are potential drawbacks associated with it. Just like other muscles in our body, the mind also needs relaxation. If people always do work without any breaks, their brains will not feel refreshed, which ultimately affects their productivity as well as the efficiency of any task. For instance, it has been observed that people who are not given enough time to soothe their minds are suffering from serious illnesses like anxiety and depression. Moreover, unstructured free time stuck the mind with many thoughts, which resulted in the mind diversifying from the main objective.
To conclude, although using free time sharpens the brain and memory, the negative aspects of excessive mental burden and serious illness must not be ignored. Hence, it would be an ideal approach to keep a balance between hobbies and spare time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30072463768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77588966496 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648550724638 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.250301051 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23422191205 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735112559933 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568421452991 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137461148471 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049013748433 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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