some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way to commute
discuss both views and give your own opinion
People living in cities have to commute to work daily using different modes of transport. It is argued that a motor car is the best option, whilst some feel that riding a bicycle to work is a better means. This essay will suggest that using a bicycle helps an individual to be healthy and reduce traffic congestion. This essay will discuss both views.
Using cycle to go to work gives a person enough exercise to his body in the busy schedule. For instance, a recent survey conducted in London showed that people who ride to office by bicycles have a better heart rate than others who drive cars. Moreover, it also contributes to the reduction of traffic problems in the cities during peak hours. Residents of Liverpool go to work on bicycles every Friday and they find that they see lesser problems with traffic when compared to other days.
However, some say that driving to office by car is the best option. The reason for this is that most of the individuals travel long distances to work and going by car saves time compared to using a bicycle. For instance, my office is 24 kilometers away from my residence and it takes about 40 minutes if I drive whereas by a bicycle it will be much longer and tiresome.
Overall, practicing to travel by bicycles to work benefits with fitness. In addition to this, the pollution caused by the combustion of fuel by motor vehicles can also be reduced. A recent study by world environmental association showed that areas with lesser motor vehicles are 17 percent healthier to live than locations with more cars and motor bikes.
In conclusion, while cycles have clear benefits over the use of cars, some feel that car is the best way to go to work. However, increased used of cycles can give healthier life and good environment, people have to use cars depending on the distance to work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68827160494 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45785036679 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3498087168 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202553103455 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688401733919 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525535727262 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111184261939 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424724994684 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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