Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The world we have been living in is getting fast and competitive every passing day, in this situation, it is indispensable for the new generation to walk side by side with the society. A healthy competition is always helpful for the learning of young generation, however, working as a team also enhances the overall skills of youth.

Children are usually persuaded to games, as there is a sense of win and lose, which create a suspense and interest in them; competition is non less than a game. kids learn helpful skills during a competition in their classrooms with other competitors, moreover, they come accross about how to get a competitive advantage over other, which help them later in their practical life. Therefore, since ages, examination system is the part of curriculam in every school and college, to assess the real ability of a kid through competition.

Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend believe that team work has more importance in building a child's confidence to tackle the problems that come later in their professional life. team work not only gives multiple hands but differenct minds as well; youngster get to know how to finish a given task on time by using multiple resources which are in hand. For instance, in corporate culture, everyone work to accomplish a single goal, whereas, they all have a different mindset, capabilities and interest, but the work is divided among all of them accordingly. Thus, schools today, focus more on extra curriculam activities where pupil work as a team to achieve something.

In conclusion, there is no denial that competitions at school levels have myriad of pros for a child development, but the way, working in a group polish the skills, should not be overlooked.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Kids
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Suggestion: Team
... come later in their professional life. team work not only gives multiple hands but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85886654399 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.2537600969 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224721588805 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804877065824 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041796282553 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12526063069 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321474419071 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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