some people think that competitive sports should be included as a subject in
school while others believe that it has negative effect on children.
Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Sports-related subjects are becoming very popular around the world. While introducing professional sports-related subjects in the school curriculum will provide a great insight into the professional world of sports to students, it is also possible that it may distract them from learning more serious subjects such as science and math. This essay will argue why including competitive sports as a subject can have its benefits.
Professional sports have a huge impact on our society. Becoming a professional player can earn someone fame and money which will be useful for them in life. If a student studies subjects that are related to sports, he or she will be able to gain extensive knowledge about sports which can help him or her to become a professional player. For instance, In the USA, students often study and play high school football which provides them a pathway to becoming a professional footballer. Introducing sport-related subjects can be a good inspiration for people who want to become professional athletes.
On the other hand, students may focus more on competitive sports than science and math-related subjects if the schools start teaching them. Science and math-related courses will help students become smarter and make them more competent. Since studying sports-related subjects can be more interesting than science and math subjects, students may give more attention to them. As a result, they will lose their interest in the subjects which can teach them a great deal of math and science. To illustrate, In the USA, people are lagging in science and math because they tend to focus more on football rather than studying science and math-related courses.
To conclude, sports-related subjects can offer a range of benefits to students. Although studying those courses can teach a student to become a professional player, it can also distract them from studying science and math. In my opinion, schools should start teaching sports-related subjects so that students can learn a great deal about competitive sports.
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also, if, may, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32716049383 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98549815063 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5119934965 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143437086275 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677382279458 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490928921954 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105959933419 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293840149513 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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