Some people think that cooking is an important skill for young people to learn. Others believe that it is better for people to learn how to cook after they become adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There has been an ongoing debate whether young adults should learn to cook at their early ages or get skilled to cook after they grow up. In my opinion, I agree that youngsters should be equipped with cooking skills as early as possible since it could be helpful for them in hard times, although many people argue that it is unnecessary and dangerous for these individuals.
First and foremost, adolescents can take advantage of being familiar with cooking when they are obligated to prepare their own meal. This is because, in some cases, youth may be left by themselves or they would be left hungry if their parents or adult relatives are not around with them. For instance, after graduating from high school, substantial amount of students prefer to study abroad or far from their hometown. In that case, they need to handle cooking by themselves since their parents will not be next to them. A second case can be given that in many occasions, parents leave their kids at home when they go out for an event or an invitation. Hence, young people ensure to know cooking in case they starve in these situations. Consequently, youngsters should be taught how to cook to deal with hunger while they alone.
On the other hand, some people argue that teaching kids how to cook is redundant and it poses danger for them. Considering this, they believe that cooking by themselves can be risky for youngsters who are also occasionally left alone. To illustrate, cutting the materials with sharp knifes or using fire to heat the meal could even burn the house or hurt the kids mistakenly. However, they fail to understand that the probability of these incidents are too low thanks to the technological developments in housing appliances and the items such as fire detector which prevents these issues to occur. Furthermore, the individualism in today’s world has been rising rapidly which causes the parents to leave their kids at home by themselves more than an occasional frequency. As a result, even though some people reject to teach their daughters or sons how to cook due to possible ramifications, it would be definitely useful in many times and it poses risks which can be neglected.
To sum up, I believe that young people should get accustomed to cook their own meal to deal with situations when they are alone, even though many individuals are opposed to the view due to its danger and unnecessity which are both preventable and invalid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 51, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to cooking'.
Suggestion: accustomed to cooking
... I believe that young people should get accustomed to cook their own meal to deal with situations ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88066825776 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63307808012 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515513126492 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7662766386 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8125 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1875 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308471219894 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114112021775 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079224362602 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213819145028 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467496881173 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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