Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?

Essay topics:

Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.
What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?

Today, fostering children is one of the critical milestones in each society, and all people try to optimize the way through which children are raised better. A flock of people holds that if governments pay parents, they can stay at home so that they have more time to spend with their offsprings. This view has both pros and cons, which I will explain.
Nowadays, life difficulties cause that in more families, both parents work outside to satisfy all their family desires and needs. However, from a physiological point of view, some times, children borning in this family suffer more obstacles in their childhood in comparison with others, including depression, joining crime, and so forth. Provided that governments give families financial support, they have the opportunity to stay at home, supervise their children, and accommodate all their needs emotionally. Besides, people learn a vital lesson in their childhood. So, the parents’ absence deprives them of these fundamental lessons. As a result, this policy makes a profound contribution to having more successful adults and cutting down the irreparable drawbacks in the future.
On the downside, from an economic point of view, this support leads to high costs for governments and it is not beneficial for families with no offsprings who believe that this money can use to stabilizing infrastructures. Hence, it can broad unsatisfaction among nations and encourage homo sapience to rebel against governments. To make matters worse, this action may help an escalating in population. And cause more plights for pupils like the insufficient education system, unemployment, and poor health condition.
In conclusion, although gains of donating money to families are measurable, it may cause some disadvantages for people and society if the governments have not proper plan for running it.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98574496706 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6767190958 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221625874149 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691318313422 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542314915075 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129246385192 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693261824703 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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