Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this views ?
These days many people are discussing about the way with which government are spending their financial budget on preserving, spreading and teaching in arts. The question is whether these kind initiations from the government are beneficial for the society and whether these financial resources should be spent in some other fruitful areas. In this particular essay, this research question is examined in detail and claims that there are huge benefits of spending on different area of arts.
At first, there is no doubt that art is reflection of both positive and negative aspects of our society and that’s why it should always be preserved by necessary funding. To explain furthermore, it is seen many artist which are appreciated by many audience express their feeling in different areas of art like paintings, poems and music explaining present scenario of their surroundings. For instance, the popular cartoon artist of our country is highly respected because of his satirical cartoon towards corruption, taxation and black marketing. That’s why, the concerned authorities must support these artist with its full effort to promote these kind creation which shows the true color of our society.
On the other hand, if the stakeholders are not interested on funding on creativity, there will be huge loss to country and also to its citizen. The individual of that nation will be deprived of past and present knowledge about the talents of his country which can lead him to dissatisfaction and follow the culture of other nation. Furthermore, if this scenario happens the society will be absent of its identity and this may also lead to migration of few virtuoso artists in place where there talent are economically acclaimed. For instance, the survey report of United States immigration law state that around thousand of artist from worldwide migrate to America with the hope of better remuneration and talent upliftment.
To recapitulate, Art is that element of society that resembles the everyday and overall picture of its surrounding. It is obvious that government has a responsibility to take care of each sectors of country and in this context art should not be neglected and must be considered as equal importance than any sectors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun artist seems to be countable; consider using: 'many artists'.
Suggestion: many artists
...ing. To explain furthermore, it is seen many artist which are appreciated by many audience ...
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Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this artist' or 'these artists'?
Suggestion: this artist; these artists
... the concerned authorities must support these artist with its full effort to promote these k...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t element of society that resembles the everyday and overall picture of its surrounding....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24861878453 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85412995721 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.654928383 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 146.153846154 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162134701622 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055991622508 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417587503254 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102981500744 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423025312134 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.