Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming more isolated.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although it is considered by some that along with development and popularization of the Internet the society has become more isolated, others opine that it has led to an opposite effect. I agree to the latter point of view and believe that Web has enabled people become more connected, since it provides them with more opportunities to communicate with one another.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that the Internet is an efficient tool to interact with others more frequently and efficiently, as it enables both long distance and instant connection, and I agree. A fundamental reason for this is that with cutting-edge technologies it has become possible to get in touch with anyone around the globe in few seconds: would that be a friend who lives abroad, or an international business partner. Currently there is a wide range of various applications and websites with the help of which a person can send instant messages, voice recordings and make video calls. In addition, with the Internet it has become possible to maintain relationships with friends and family even when people work under tough conditions and do not have enough time to meet them physically.
On the other hand, some people disagree with the abovementioned opinion, as the Internet might drag people into virtual reality and potentially minimize real life communication. To substantiate such a point of view it is suggested that online communication can have psychological repercussions on the users by making them detach themselves from the surrounding environment. As a result, the more time one spends surfing the Internet, the less attached they can become with relatives and friends; however, no factual evidence to support this idea has been reported. Moreover, it can be often noticed how people remain connected to the society, simply because they are able to constantly chat to those who they know in real life online.
To conclude, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that online technologies are most likely to have a favorable impact on human interaction, since the Internet has made socialization among people and communities easier and faster.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...long with development and popularization of the Internet the society has become m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, i think, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16239316239 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96764641904 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578347578348 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 22.9357709 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 164.727272727 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9090909091 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278069144904 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103948629054 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814454068738 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181832653918 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555630032823 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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