Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is argued that many of those, who have already been to prison once, commit more crimes afterwards. In my opinion, the reason for this phenomena is the impact of the society and the experience gained in jail.
To begin with, I believe that imprisonment pushes the person out of the community, creating barriers when trying to return to the ordinary course of life. This, as a result, may give rise to tension and the former prisoner might form a negative attitude towards after members of the society. Secondly, those, who have got to jail first time might get greatly affected by the interraction with other criminals. This especially relates to teenagers and young adults. The younger generation is considered to be most vulnerable to stressful situations, and can become even more violent when exposed to negative examples.
To solve the aforementioned issue it can take effort both from the community and the prison officials. Firstly, it is essential to build communicative bridges between those in jail and outside of it. For example, local authorities can implement social programs to teach children at schools that those, who have previously been arrested are equal members of the society. Another important aspect is the intense atmosphere in jails. Nowadays many prisons in prosperous countries hold cultural events, enabling the prisoners express their thoughts and emotions with the help of art and recreational activities.
To conclude, in my point of view educating the society and improving the atmosphere in prisons is the key to ensure that less people among those, swho have been to jail repeatedly break the law.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73682403117 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5999544834 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132395288469 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450712477559 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434208466728 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07918333052 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062405634488 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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