Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Education has the first priority that concerns any society. Although mixed genders education is beneficial for some people, it contains many disadvantages for other. In the following lines both ideas will be discussed.
I believe that, boys and girls should be used to interact. They have to learn the ways of dealing with each other and how the different sex is normally behave and react. This type of learning will also result in a challenging spirit, which will help them to be more motivated. For example, an article which was published in New York Times in, 2014 about children in ages between 10 and 15 shows that ,both boys and girls in mixed schools are scoring 40% higher grades than those who are in single gender ones. Thus, mixed school merits are obvious and children will benefit more in learning the know-how of behaving with other gender in addition to become more motivated.
The other opinion, which I do not agree with, is arguing that, teenager will consume their time in an unwanted challenging situation which we have seen it a lot between youths. For example, a research paper which was published by Alexandria University in, 2009 tells that , 10% of young people time is spend in wasting time with other gender which affects their studying scores.
To conclude, the professional interact between the gender is inevitable.
It will become fact in any family’s offspring future life under several circumstances such as marriage and work, for this reason it is recommended from my point of view to allow them to mix and learn to deal with each other from early ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: behaved
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89667896679 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50455629354 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4560736293 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131208436702 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519798293202 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500086249731 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616123617096 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492116881665 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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