Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the contemporary society, the job market undergoes frequent changes now and then and so does the requirements of skill set needed to carry out a particular work. It is judicious for people to work with a varied career at least once in their life to acquire those skills while at the same time ensuring demand within the job market. I will put forth the points for this side of the argument, in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, varied job allows an individual to increase their money. This will assist them to reduce the burden of finances. Moreover, a new job will prompt learning additional skills that will further aid in their promotion. Furthermore, an expanded range of skills under the belt, give a boost to the chances of securing a high paying job. For example, a person working as customer service agent can operate as a manager as they have client communication skills and know how to deal with them, while at the same time developing a new expertise like teamwork collaboration.
On the other hand, it will break the monotony of the previous job. Often it is observed that people start working with tremendous enthusiasm and vigor but as time passes their interest wanes. Consequently, they set about pursuing better opportunities. Hence, a career change will help achieve this goal.
To conclude, I would like to emphasise that people should make an attempt to pursue a different career at least once in their life. This will not only facilitate them in reducing the financial burden but also overcome the monotonous routine of the preceding job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, at least, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89591078067 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66565822108 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3648414655 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294373915776 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967299970743 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877238096583 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195658993411 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556184208544 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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