Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Occasionally, some people say that one should change their career at least once in their professional work life instead of being struck to one type of job. I agree with this statement as one must be in a happy state of mind and should have a chance to correct career path. This essay will discuss this in detail in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, working in one type of job can be monotonous and boring. Boredom can often lead a person to be unhappy state of mind which can lower the productivity at work. For instance, a recent study by Career Foundry has showed that working with the same people in the same place doing same things can kill the excitement and result in lower productive energy in the advertising firms. Inevitably, this seeps into the staff’s personal life and hence the need to change and renew the energy to feel happy again.
Secondly, most people kill their inner passion and work in fields for economic requirements. Financial stability becomes a priority for most at the start of their career. For example, my brother was an excellent stand-up comedian during his school years but graduated in business and worked as banker for 10 years only to quit and join a group as a comedian who now performs on TV. Hence the pressure to make career decision earlier on should not be final for a lifetime.
In conclusion, some people think it best for people to change their career route at least once rather sticking with it for the rest of their life. In my opinion, I think it is important for people to evaluate and change their career path once they have reached their financial stability and take the risk to renew the energies or follow one’s passion. Exploring e-learning options can lead many to comfortably upgrade and change careers today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73548387097 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45729392713 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1939090765 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423001752062 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142684034756 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132860120073 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259439194049 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126162523931 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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