Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern era, the entertainment industry is growing throughout the world due to globalization. Several countries import films and TV shows from their counterparts. Whereas, because of cultural benefits, some people are in favor of this approach, others are reluctant to it and opine that domestically produced movies and shows should be encouraged more. In this essay, both of these views are outlined followed by my opinion.
To begin with, it is credible that artists from different countries altogether provide a wide range of entertainment sources. Not only it improves knowledge of an individual about the cultures and traditions of various countries, but also most people acquire the linguistic skills of foreign languages by watching foreign movies. To exemplify, youngsters as well as adults prefer to watch Hollywood talk shows or web series to master English speaking skills. Empirical observation suggests that the human brain tends to learn languages faster when a person listens to it rather than reading or cramming. Thus, importing non-native shows is imperative for improving a country's culture.
On the other hand, the inclination of the public of a country towards foreign movies could also have demerits for a country. In other words, if the movies would be produced locally, the nation's economy will be boosted as it would create more employment opportunities in the domestic entertainment market. For instance, struggling and talented potential artists would get jobs, only if, the audience would be interested to see films directed and produced in their own country. Furthermore, some content in non-native shows might be opposing to other cultures and could create disputes among nations, consequently, hampering the harmony in the world.
In conclusion, even though foreign pictures and programs are advantageous for information and a variety, sometimes they could hurt the sentiments of individuals of a different culture and could be detrimental to a country's economy. Therefore, there is also a need to develop the local entertainment industry and to strengthen it for competing on a global platform.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52923076923 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03473227814 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609230769231 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8040981886 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253710617581 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784105818521 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555820385227 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128865266509 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524673279924 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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