Some people think that it is necessary to travel another country to learn about it. Others argue that all the information is available on TV and the Internet. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, due to the expansion of internet all across the globe people can access a wide range of information in a variety of fields and it assists them to know about other nations’ customs, traditions and costumes. People have different views on how to get familiar with different nations. While a group of them discuss that it would be more likely to know about the other countries via internet and TV, others believe that it is indispensable for them to travel and visit the destination country personally. I assert that although the internet provides us a range of useful information, it would be more influential to visit a country.
There are some persuasive arguments in favor of using internet and TV in order to know about a country. It is true that there are a variety of information about the weather, population, religion, tourist attractions and historical sites in the internet but it is not enough for an individual to know a country profoundly. Take for example Africa, which is popular for its dance festivals and the ethnic foods. Although by surfing the net and browsing the web sites such as Wiki people can obtain these information, it is not probable for them to watch the dances and feel the environment, or even feel the smell of the cuisines.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I would argue that fellows should travel to know about another country. Firstly, travelling to the new country gives people the chance to stay with local people and feel the ways of their life by heart. They can try the ethnic foods and visit their life in person. The residents of some countries are very hospitable and attentive and do their best to make a pleasant environment for their guest. Secondly, tourists can attend some festivals and investigate their wedding rituals. A salient example of this is India in which tourists experience great excitement in color festival.
In conclusion, it is true that documentaries and other types of informative programes are beneficial for people but it is essential for the to travel to the destination country to learn more about their culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91436464088 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76083517445 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488950276243 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6292364073 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276674711142 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086890727592 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673846521499 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168323109209 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351111024733 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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