Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Nowadays there is a significant body of opinion that argued that schools have the role to teach skills related to be a good parent in the future. I totally agree with this point of view, because despite parenting is beyond academic knowledge, it is relevant to show to young people the necessaries responsibilities and compromise that a parent must have.

To begin with, every school should have this sort of education to aware the future generations how to be a responsible parent. It is a fact that many families have several problems running their families and the main cause is ignorance. Additionally society usually have myths and preconceptions related to parenting that can culminate in children abuse. For instance, In USA, states that has implemented parenting classes since 2002 have observed a 40% decrease in family violence in the last ten years. In short, this kind of education in schools can have a positive impact in future families.

Furthermore, this type of training can help teenagers to be mindful if they desire to be a parent in the future. Start a family is a huge responsibility that is not for everyone, therefore it is important that people be able to choose parenting as a wanted path to create healthy families. To illustrate this point, several psychologist studies reveal that parents that started a family without previous planning have a high tendency associated with domestic violence. On the whole, running this classes in the educational system is a way to aware people about the duties of parenting and discern if this path is the right.

To conclude, Schools are the perfect place to teach young people about the indispensable skills to be a good father or mother, because that learning can bring more healthy families in the future.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in short, kind of, sort of, on the whole, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00673400673 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83234836866 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4338193758 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333933835067 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130672393657 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892606055916 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224827598025 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632967367263 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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