Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Latest technologies have increased various communication possibilities across the globe. Many opponents, on the other hand feel that, it has declined real human interactions. Irrespective of both these arguments, my view is that, latest technologies has improved the connection between people worldwide. Thus, making mankind more approachable.
Firstly, innovation of mobile phones have encouraged humankind to connect comfortably these days. The internet has broadened the communicative horizons for many individuals worldwide. Myriad of employees, for instance, who are employed in foreign countries use a host of video calling facilities available almost everywhere. This enables them to see and talk with their loved ones; which has improved personal touch among relationships recently. As a result, present-day internet has facilitated numerous ways to become approachable and accessible.
However, few opponents feel that, the contemporary high-techs are responsible for exhausting abundance of time through various online services. For example nowadays people spend a lot of time online for video conferencing and social networking. Thus, they are becoming more addictive to their personal gadgets and use it for most of the time. Along with that, many men and women are getting deprived of real interactions with other human species. As a consequence of this, the significance of physical communication and interactions have started losing its value.
In conclusion, computers, hand-held tech devices, and trending technologies have opened opportunities to become amicable globally at present. In contrast, people also think that, it has reduced the amount of time people used to spend for real discussions. I am of the opinion that, current technologies are powerful, and effective, and they have helped us become more sociable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86296296296 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17851368497 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0962162328 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157432168756 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470892208722 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575971229244 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100859852007 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075663340868 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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