some people think money is the best gift to give to youngsters, while others disagree. discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A few people reckon that the best present to give to young adult is money, while some others disagree. In my opinion, i consider that money is the best gift for youngsters, as this enable them to buy trendy stuffs and can also choose the items they wish to have.
On the one hand, some people think that money is the best present for young teens, because, buying gifts for them can be tricky and i agree with this. In other words, purchasing items for teenagers is a bit complicated because, they are in the process of maturing and going through puberty. Therefore, they may want gifts that are trendy and more expensive. Furthermore, even youngsters like having their own money. Consequently, unless you want to provide the with their favorite foods, items such as clothes and footwear, money is the best to give to them. In order for them to choose items the crave for.
on the other hand, other people are of the opinion, that money is not the best gift for young adult. They believe that, these teenagers may squander the gifted money in frivolous purchases. They may buy items that are not age appropriate or items that are hazardous. In addition, some of these youngsters may develop a bad habit like smoking and doing drugs, simple because they have the cash gift to purchase whatever they want. Hence, other presents like like electronic gadgets and gift card should be given to them to avoid unnecessary spending and buying.
In conclusion, despite people having different views, i believe that cash gifts is the best presents to give to a teenager, as this, will enable them choose the kind of gift they want, such as their favorite meals, clothes and shoes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72696245734 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31710704942 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488054607509 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9868787097 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287740208988 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114263923005 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113653869881 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213727445832 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931377107927 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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