Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Mannerism is the first thing comes to mind when talking about children. Some people argues that parents should be responsible for their children’s societal skills, while others consider schools for this purpose. Although, parents are the first teachers of their children, I am of the opinion that schools are the best place to learn social etiquette.
To begin with, those who believe parents should develop their children’s social behavior have their reasons. Starting from birth, children spend time with their parents and therefore, they start following their footsteps. They tends to believe their parents actions as always correct. Therefore, it is duty of matured ones to teach adolescents the policy of “we reap what we sow” by explaining them about social services such as donations or charity. Other than that, children are considered to be the reflection of their ancestors. Put differently, little ones will attain how their parents are behaving at home, within the family and society. If parents maintains peace at homes, it will nurture their children also to possess calmness and patience in their behavior.
Despite of above factors, however I strongly believe schools are the best place to teach young ones how to blend in the society positively. Teachers not only develop the intellectual skills of a child, but also the interpersonal skills by making them interact with other children in classrooms. This helps them in understanding about different cultures and communities, thus avoiding the discrimination. Consequently, this will make them more friendly, sharing and caring minds. Moreover, schools also teach them the most important ethic and that is punctuality. In other words, schools run over the clock in a day and this practice make children learn the importance of time in life, because wasting someone’s time is considered as disrespectful in the society.
To sum up, although parents teach children to take first steps towards the societal manners, I believe schools play an extra hand in nurturing the overall development of children in terms of discipline and values.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'tend'
Suggestion: tend
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, talking about, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41141141141 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84223724323 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.396777263 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242014582279 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820023655369 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532293641017 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158774540015 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479535607207 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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