In recent decades, the public knows that one of the most responsible to be a good inhabitant is that people pay their taxes on time. Some people believe that paying taxes will give big support for societies, while others believe that there are many responsibilities out of just paying taxes.
It is true that taxes lead to a lot of benefits for the public and the government. Firstly, the money that has been collected will be re-allocated to be public facilities such as the development of infrastructure, improvement in military technologies, paying civil servants, and others. Furthermore, In developed countries, paying taxes empower the country's economy by reducing the number of poverty, increasing subsidiary for people with the lowest income, and developing human resources in education.
Although paying taxes has proven significantly to support the societies, there are many other responsibilities that should be taken by inhabitants. For instance, the contribution of services for other people who lived in remote areas such as the east area of Indonesia. The inhabitants can support these people in the term about human development and medical because this area does not have enough teachers and doctors.
In addition, Supporting others can be conducted by giving a solution to the biggest problem in societies. For instance, In Indonesia, many people do not have opportunities to get a better job in this country so that opening the start-up companies is the most solution to decrease the number of unemployed people. Companies such as Go-Jek and Tokopedia are an example because these companies not only give added value to the countries via taxing but also open job opportunities for a large number of people.
In conclusion, paying taxes is the main responsibility for people who lived in a country but there are many other activities that give a big impact rather than paying taxes such as helping remote areas and opening start-up companies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 481, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ing but also open job opportunities for a large number of people. In conclusion, paying taxes is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21518987342 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99715455508 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7055795281 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236496802711 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992740274098 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805927838836 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156559366273 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922891961702 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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