Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society while others think people have more responsibilities as members of the society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Taxation is one of the financial instruments used by government to generate income. Some people believe that paying taxes is the only citizens' responsibility to the society while others believe there are more responsibilities expected from the citizens to the society. In my opinion, I believe there are more to citizens' civic duties than paying taxes. Thus, this essay will examine the importance of paying taxes and other civic obligation that is equally important.
Taxation plays an important role in the development of the society. It has made it possible for the government to realise their social and economic goals. For example, over eighty percent of the government internally generated revenue comes from the personal income tax, and the larger proportion of this revenue generated are used to provide infrastructural facilities such as free health services, construction of roads and schools. In my opinion, there is no doubt that failure on the part of the people to fulfil their duties of paying tax would impede the development of the society.
Nonetheless, voting during the election is one of the civic responsibilities of the citizens . The people are expected to participate in the process of selecting their leaders : people who are to represent their interest in government. This will enable them to hold the leaders accountable and make them to be more responsive to the needs of the society . For instance, there is increased level of apathy among the citizens. In the last election, only sixty five percent from the total number of the eligible adults registered , and just measly thirty percent of the registered voters actually voted. Voting during election is crucial to the political development of the society. In my opinion, there is need to arouse the political consciousness of the people and motivate them to become more engaged in the political activities in the society.
In conclusion, although paying taxes is vital to societal development, civic responsibility is not limited to paying taxes alone. There are duties that are equally important as paying tax in which voting during the election is one them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, nonetheless, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23188405797 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9112650303 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0481272641 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295533075711 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090178981044 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915892884962 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191118164317 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075778685931 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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