In future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
The information revolution has led to increase in the rate at which people access news and download books online. It is believed that online news and e-books will completely replace traditional newspaper and printed books in future. I completely disagree with the opinion as some segments of the society will totally depend on printed newspaper and books due to health implication of e-books and online newspaper.
There is no doubt that people will have more access to news and easily download books freely on internet because printing cost is excluded which make them become cheaper. Moreover, virtually all press companies have blogs where they publish daily news and also many websites where books can easily be downloaded. For this reason, people believe that online news will totally displaced production of printed newspaper and books in future.
It is indubitably that people will have more access to news and download books online without being charged , but it is certain that it cannot completely replace the production of traditional newspaper and printed books as some segments of the society will still depend on it. The larger percentage of the population of Nigeria are people over 60 years and most of them are not conversant with technological innovation as they find it difficult to operate computer and smartphones . In addition, exposing their eyes to computer and phone screen could damage their sight. Thus , replacing printed newspaper and books with online news and e-book in future would mean cutting off this segment of the society from the rest of the world.
In conclusion, although people will have more access to news and book on internet freely, online news and e-books cannot completely displace production of printed newspaper and books as the older generations will still depend on them due to adverse effects of computer and smartphone screen on their sight .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21895424837 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57374278534 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477124183007 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5414826687 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.181818182 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273672259685 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128639942911 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739280520965 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199125893718 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287545340893 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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