Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree?
The adage "All work and no play makes jack a dull boy" holds true. Few people are convinced that schools ought to be more fun for children, while others see it no more than the place for imparting knowledge. In my opinion, I consider schools should be the place where children enjoys themselves and look forward to come back next day. This could be achieved if there is ample space for entertainment.
One good reason for school to being entertaining is that it fosters holistic growth of child. Not only the academic perspective is important but also the physical and mental health is vital for their proper nourishment and upbringing. Moreover, not all students in school could be good in studies; some might have innate skills for other extra curricular activities. So providing platform for them through entertainment activities like music, dance and sports classes opens opportunities to hone their skills which would else be killed if the only emphasis is on education.
Another point to consider is having schools following entertaining methods of teaching would not only let students understand the concepts better but also would encourage them to be involved , quick learner and creative. Due to rapid advancement in technology there are various innovative ways of learning that could be used in schools such as audio-video lessons, games to stimulate brain and enhance cognitive skills and applications to improve or learn any new language. Incorporating these fun factors to educate students would be a win-win scenario as they understand the insights of subject while doing something they enjoy.
All in all, I believe schools supporting entertainment as their mode of teaching is ideal as it encourage children to apply themselves to study in a manner which does not feels like a burden to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to coming'.
Suggestion: to coming
...dren enjoys themselves and look forward to come back next day. This could be achieved i...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...also would encourage them to be involved , quick learner and creative. Due to rapi...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
Suggestion: encourages
...s their mode of teaching is ideal as it encourage children to apply themselves to study i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18581081081 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81417033848 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2454936467 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.916666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202268946766 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071797273152 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488367557251 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113421496212 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290120576717 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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